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Old 11-13-2017, 03:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Blackcat31 View Post
no problem!
As far as the first line "Thank you for choosing ABC childcare". I don't really have a name for my daycare. How should I word that. Just Sheri's Child Care?

So this is my opening paragraph. How can I make it better?

Thank you for choosing me as your daycare provider! I want to welcome you and your child to our family. I treat all of the kids as if they’re my own. We celebrate birthdays and holidays too! You are welcome to send a treat for birthdays if you like, just check with me to see if anyone has any allergies. "
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