It does take a while to get started, but some things I noticed,froma quick glance:

Very clean! That's a plus.

There's nothing to do in the backyard. A tiny climbing structure..not fun.

Cords! Some tied up by a lamp, and one hanging down to the ground.

Some may be turned off by forced air vents along the wall, but nothing you can do there.

On the about me page, you switch tenses, from me & we in the first paragraph, to writing in the 3rd person in the others.

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