Ohh. WOW. I didn't catch then. I sort of feel stupid that I didn't understand that.

I would say instead then: Families are eligible for vacation time after being enrolled for 60 days. or something along those lines. And I was a little worried about offending you. Sometimes when I am blunt and don't sugar coat things people take it the wrong way. It's not that I mean to be rude, but I am usually just short and too the point when editing things, I guess you could say. It's hard to explain. But I hope those suggestions helped! Overall it wasn't bad, just needs a little tweaking in my personal opinion. But it would probably be fine as is too.

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