Originally Posted by Blackcat31:
I think it sounds great!
Its simple and easy to understand. If you want to add any attention getting type text/print, you can bold certain words or highlight certain sections....especially the parts where you say NO EXCEPTIONS of the time when late fees begin. That way they'll surely see/read that part!
Otherwise, it's short, sweet and to the point!
You don't think it sounds too rigid? I do for the most part really like my families and don't want to come off sounding like a bitch.
How much do you charge when they're late? I put after 5:20 is considered late, so how much for after that?