Originally Posted by Blackcat31:
no problem! 
As far as the first line "Thank you for choosing ABC childcare". I don't really have a name for my daycare. How should I word that. Just Sheri's Child Care?
So this is my opening paragraph. How can I make it better?
"
Thank you for choosing me as your daycare provider! I want to welcome you and your child to our family. I treat all of the kids as if they’re my own. We celebrate birthdays and holidays too! You are welcome to send a treat for birthdays if you like, just check with me to see if anyone has any allergies. "