Originally Posted by Heidi:
I like your pictures. Is it possible to add one of the inside of your dc? The ad sound good, no typos/grammar mistakes that I can see.
Agreed! I'd love to see a picture of an open, sunny playroom and a comfy, mellow sleeping area.
It's a great ad - 100 times better than most I've seen in my area. But you used the word "learn" a lot, which is great, but maybe you could also add in "fun."