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kelsey's kids 08:50 PM 12-18-2013
http://twinfalls.craigslist.org/kid/4237780905.html
coolconfidentme 02:43 AM 12-19-2013
I like it what you say about your home, but I wouldn't put down a center. Personally, I steer clear of company that uses negatively toward the competition regardless of the service they truly offer.
Scout 04:30 AM 12-19-2013
I noticed a beginning of a sentenc that was not capitalized and also a spelling error but, now I cant remember!
Laurel 04:35 AM 12-19-2013
I wouldn't say anything about centers either.
Also, there are spelling errors, words that should be capitalized that aren't, etc. I would check that over especially since you are advertising that you do preschool.
Laurel
Also, there are spelling errors, words that should be capitalized that aren't, etc. I would check that over especially since you are advertising that you do preschool.
Laurel
MotherNature 04:52 AM 12-19-2013
There are a lot of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors I would fix. You want to look as professional as possible, so I'd work on those. I agree w/ the PP-highlight the positive. DO NOT put anything negative in your ad.
spinnymarie 08:09 AM 12-19-2013
I agree, check again for spelling and punctuation. I can help if you need it.
I'd also leave out the center part, as other said, and I'd try to shorten it up if possible.
I'd also leave out the center part, as other said, and I'd try to shorten it up if possible.
kelsey's kids 09:24 AM 12-19-2013
I sent you a friend request as I would love your help. I have never been very good and Grammer and not sure where to go about making it shorter